Band 6+: What work do you do

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides sufficient detail about the candidate's work. To improve, consider elaborating on the specific tasks and responsibilities within the role of a business officer. Adding details about the nature of the multinational company would also enhance the response.

The answer is understandable, but the numerous filler words like "uh" disrupt the fluency. Try to minimize these and practice speaking more smoothly. The structure is simple but effective; you could improve coherence by briefly mentioning the type of activities you engage in outside your job.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Using more precise language to describe your job responsibilities and extracurricular activities would enhance your score. For example, instead of "various activities," specify what those activities are.

Grammar is mostly correct, but there's a minor error in the phrasing "I am preparation for IElt exam." It should be "I am preparing for the IELTS exam." Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures to showcase your abilities.