Band 6+: What would you change about your city ?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is a good start to answering the question, but it could be improved by providing more specific examples and details. Consider expanding on how you would raise awareness and what specific changes you would like to see in vehicle use. Elaborating on the benefits of these changes would also strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements in word choice would enhance fluency. Instead of 'accommodate them to use public transport,' consider 'encourage them to use public transport' for better clarity and natural phrasing. The slight repetition of 'use vehicles' could be avoided by rephrasing.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Words like 'accommodate' are not perfectly suited here. Using synonyms like 'encourage' or 'promote' would demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. More specific vocabulary related to urban planning or environmental concerns would further improve the score.

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor issues. The phrasing 'I want to raise awareness of people' is slightly awkward; 'I want to raise awareness among people' is grammatically more correct. While the answer is understandable, using more complex sentence structures would demonstrate a wider grammatical range.