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Band 6+: What would you like to suggest.those people who are struggling become a good artist as we as singer?

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For those struggling to become a good artist and singer, I suggest finding your own path. First, ask yourself: what do you want to achieve? Do you want to play music, become a financial analyst, or be an artist? There's a difference between being an artist and a commercial artist. To succeed, you need to practice consistently.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I would like to show these those people who are uh, struging become a good singer as well as good writer, good artist. I think they have to find your own destination. First of all. Then how would you like to play guitar music? Become a financial st. Or become a artist? There is difference of artists and become a commercial artist so that you have to practice more than.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

artist: 3

become: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The student provides some relevant suggestions, but they are not fully developed or specific. For example, suggesting finding one's own path is a good starting point, but the student could have elaborated on how to do this. The student also mentions the difference between an artist and a commercial artist, but doesn't explain this difference clearly. The student could have provided more concrete advice, such as suggesting taking classes, practicing regularly, or seeking feedback from others.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is generally fluent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions. The student's ideas are not always organized logically, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the student jumps from suggesting finding one's own path to asking a series of questions about different career paths. The student could have used more cohesive devices, such as conjunctions and transition words, to connect their ideas.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of imprecise language. For example, the student uses the phrase "financial st." instead of "financial analyst." The student could have used more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to express their ideas more clearly. The student also uses the word "artist" in a few different ways, which could be confusing for the listener.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, but there are some errors. For example, the student uses the incorrect pronoun "your" instead of "your" in the phrase "find your own destination." The student also uses the incorrect tense in the phrase "There is difference of artists." The student could have paid more attention to grammatical accuracy and used a wider range of grammatical structures.

What is your full name

Certainly. My full name is Mohammad Said Tariff. Although, uh, said in informal situation.

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