Band 6+: Whats your favourite hobby

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is comprehensive and directly addresses the question. It provides multiple examples and explains the benefits of the mentioned hobbies.

The response is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and unclear phrasing. The connection between hobbies and dealing with depression is not very smooth. To improve, focus on clearer transitions and more direct explanations. Practice speaking more smoothly without unnecessary pauses.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly precise or varied. The phrase 'swinging is a good life' is unclear and 'social would I when I am depression' is grammatically incorrect and lacks clarity. To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive words related to your hobbies and how they make you feel. Expand your vocabulary related to emotions and activities.

The response contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb usage ('swinging is a good life'), awkward sentence structure ('to realize after school'), and incorrect word order ('social would I when I am depression'). To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and clearer sentence structures. Practice constructing simple and complex sentences accurately.