Band 4+: When did you start using social media?

Your pronunciation is poor and often impedes understanding. Regular, focused pronunciation exercises are recommended.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a specific answer. However, expanding on the 'fears' mentioned would strengthen the response and make it more engaging. Consider elaborating on the positive aspects of social media use as well. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is very hesitant and disfluent, with excessive repetition of "im." While the refined answer is understandable, the raw answer shows a significant lack of fluency and coherence. Work on speaking more smoothly and reducing filler words and repetitions. Practice speaking at a natural pace.

The vocabulary is quite limited. While "Fringe" is used, the overall range is narrow. Expand your vocabulary to describe your experiences with social media more precisely and richly. Consider using more descriptive adjectives and adverbs.

Grammatical accuracy is poor. There are numerous grammatical errors and incomplete sentences in the raw answer. Focus on improving sentence structure and tense consistency. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences.