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Band 6+: Which facilities are important for people living in cities?

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So, in my opinion, there are two categories of facilities that should be available in a city. The primary facilities consist of health facilities and education facilities, as well as recreational amenities. Meanwhile, for the additional facilities beyond the primary, I would say that shopping centers, markets, and interesting places are important.

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So, in my opinion, there are, um, two, uh, categories of facilities that should be able in a city for us is the primary facilities. It consist of the, uh, health facility and, uh, uh, education facility. And also the spa amenities. Uh, meanwhile, uh, for the additional facilities, uh, from the, uh, primary, I will, uh, say that, uh, the shopping center, a market and also, uh, interesting places. I will.

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