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Band 6+: Which law should be removed from your country

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Yes, I live in the USA, so one law that should be removed is the death penalty. The death penalty isn't just about one person's life; it affects all people's lives. The community will be afraid of the death penalty and cannot do anything without rules, so it has to be removed to improve all industries.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Yes, I live in the USA so one law which have to be removed is death penalty because death penalty isn’t just about the person’s life, it is about all person’s life so community will be afraid of death penalty and cannot do anything without any rule so it have to be removed to improve all industry

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

death: 3

penalty: 3

removed: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, the explanation lacks depth and the connection between the death penalty and its impact on various industries is not fully developed. Consider providing more specific examples and exploring the issue more comprehensively to strengthen your response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the delivery is somewhat hesitant and lacks smoothness. There's some repetition and self-correction. Improving fluency would involve practicing speaking more naturally and confidently, reducing pauses and filler words. A more structured approach to presenting the argument would also enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "improve all industries" are a bit vague. More precise and nuanced vocabulary would strengthen the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to express ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement issues ("one law which have"), incorrect use of articles ("the community will be afraid of death penalty"), and a slightly awkward sentence structure ("so it have to be removed to improve all industry"). Focusing on accurate grammar and sentence construction is crucial for a higher score. Reviewing grammar rules and practicing sentence formation would be beneficial.

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