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Band 6+: Who are smart children likely to be influenced by?

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Well, personally, I think that children are likely to be influenced by their parents, peers, or teachers. They are one of the most crucial influences, but the most crucial person is the teacher, who provides the entire education for the child. I believe that being a teacher is one of the ways to help a child become smarter.

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Well, personally, I think there was children likely to be influenced by their parents, peers or the teachers. They were one of the most crucial, but one of the most crucial person. It is a teacher that gives the whole education for the kid. And I believe that being a teacher is one of the ways to get the kid more smarter.

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teacher: 2

child: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points. However, it focuses too much on personal opinions and experiences, and it would be better to answer the question in a more general and objective way, providing a broader range of influences beyond parents, peers, and teachers. Consider exploring the influence of media, role models, and broader societal factors.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some noticeable hesitations and repetitions ("one of the most crucial, but one of the most crucial person"). Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions and a more confident delivery. Consider pausing briefly to gather your thoughts before speaking, rather than rushing through the answer.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but lacks precision in places. Words like "smarter" could be replaced with more sophisticated alternatives, such as "intellectually stimulated" or "cognitively developed." Aim for more precise and nuanced vocabulary to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ("They were one of the most crucial") and incorrect word order. While the message is conveyed, improving grammatical accuracy is essential for a higher score. Focus on practicing sentence structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement.

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