Band 5+: Who do you spend more time with: your family or your friends?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is somewhat off-topic. While it mentions meeting new people, it doesn't directly address the question of whether more time is spent with family or friends. Try to directly answer the question and provide specific examples to support your answer. Elaborate on your relationships with both family and friends to give a more complete picture.

The answer is understandable but lacks coherence. The connection between meeting new people and the statement about market-oriented friends isn't clear. Improving the structure and adding a clearer transition would enhance fluency and coherence. Consider rephrasing to directly address the question of whether more time is spent with family or friends.

The vocabulary is adequate but not precise. Phrases like "market money friends" are unclear. Using more precise vocabulary, such as 'acquaintances' or describing the type of friends, would improve the lexical resource score. The phrase 'grow my relationships' is acceptable but could be more specific.

There are grammatical errors, such as "market money friends" and the slightly awkward phrasing of the sentence. While the overall message is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.