Band 7+: Who is your favorite sportsperson and why?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant and provides a clear choice of sportsperson. Elaborating on Ayn Vien's positive social media influence adds depth. To achieve a higher score, consider expanding on specific aspects of her swimming achievements or the nature of her positive influence. More detail would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements could be made by using more sophisticated linking words or phrases to connect the two sentences. The slight repetition of 'in Vietnam' could be avoided.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Using 'impact' instead of 'influence' in the second sentence would be more precise and sophisticated. More varied vocabulary would elevate the response.

The grammar is largely accurate and the sentences are well-structured. The phrasing 'a really positive influence' could be slightly improved for greater precision. The use of simple sentence structures is effective but incorporating more complex structures would enhance the score.