Band 5+: Who is your inspiration

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear, relevant response. You successfully expanded on the initial idea by categorizing your family's traits and then narrowing the focus to your father. To reach a higher level of development, you could provide a specific example of a time your father's kindness or hard work inspired you, or explain how their support has specifically influenced your own actions or goals. This would add more depth to the narrative.

The speaker struggles to maintain a coherent flow. There is significant repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'honest person', 'work hard'), and the response ends abruptly without a logical conclusion. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices (like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition') to link ideas rather than repeating the same subject, and practice completing your thoughts to avoid trailing off.

The vocabulary is very basic and repetitive. The word 'person' is used excessively, and the speaker struggles to find the correct word forms (e.g., using 'supported' instead of 'supportive'). To reach a higher band, try to use synonyms. Instead of saying 'make money,' you could say 'earn a living' or 'provide financial stability.' Instead of 'good and kind,' you could use 'compassionate' or 'altruistic'.

There are frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. Issues include incorrect word forms ('supported' vs 'supportive'), improper sentence structure ('work hard for give make money'), and incomplete sentences ('and I was'). You need to work on subject-verb agreement and the use of infinitive phrases (e.g., 'to provide' instead of 'for give'). Focus on mastering simple and compound sentence structures before attempting complex ones.