Band 7+: Who would more changes more often , young people or old people

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer directly addresses the prompt and provides a clear comparison between young and old people's propensity for change. Specific reasons are given for both groups, enhancing clarity. Including more detailed examples of changes made by each group would further strengthen the response and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic. Consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize the main points. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is well-organized and coherent. The speaker's ideas flow logically, and the transitions between points are smooth. There is only one minor point of self-correction ('quite little' should be 'quickly'). Minor improvements in fluency would elevate this to a band 9.

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly precise. Words like "stable lifestyles" and "open to new opportunities" show good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider lexical range. For example, instead of 'frankly,' a more nuanced word could be used.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only a few minor errors ('quite little' instead of 'quickly'). The speaker uses a range of grammatical structures effectively. More complex sentence structures and a wider variety of grammatical forms would improve the score.