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Band 6+: Why are many people so keen on reading?

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I completely agree that parents should encourage their children to develop the reading habit from an early age. It helps them to be independent, focused, and knowledgeable, and it improves their language skills. When they grow up, reading books related to their fields can help them gain a promotion or a pay raise, leading to a better quality of life.

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I completely agree that parents should have their children develop the reading habit from an early age. It helps them to be independent, focused, often knowledge actively and effectively, and improve language skills. When they grow up, the read books relate to their fields to gain a promotion or a pay raise. They will have a better quality of life.

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it focuses more on the benefits of reading for children and career advancement, rather than exploring the broader reasons why many people enjoy reading. Consider exploring a wider range of motivations for reading, such as pleasure, escapism, learning, and personal growth, to provide a more comprehensive response.

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Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrasing 'often knowledge actively and effectively' is awkward and could be replaced with more precise and natural language, such as 'actively and effectively acquire knowledge' or 'become more knowledgeable'. A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response.

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