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Band 5+: Why are some people unwilling to have conversations with others?

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Well, off the top of my head, I think that they might have had some physical issues when they were children. For example, the vast majority of people nowadays have mental health challenges due to issues they faced at school. As a result, this has a huge impact on their personality as they grow up. In addition, maybe they don't like to talk with anyone they don't know. For a second reason, they may not find any topics to discuss. I think it's vital for everyone to be encouraged to talk together.

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Well, off the top of my head, I think that they might have some physical issues when they were children. For example, the vast majority of people nowadays have mental health due to some issues they are facing when they were at school. For example, as a result, this huge impact on their personality when they grow up, in addition, maybe they don’t like to talk with anybody they don’t know. So, for the second reason, they don’t find any topic to talk about. So, I think it’s vital for everyone to encourage to talk together.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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think: 2

issues: 2

don't: 2

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks depth and generalizability. Consider exploring a wider range of reasons, such as social anxiety, communication barriers, personality differences, or cultural factors, rather than focusing solely on childhood experiences and a lack of shared topics. Broaden your scope to encompass more general societal trends and avoid overly specific examples.

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The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and slightly rambling nature. A clearer structure with a more concise introduction and conclusion would improve fluency and coherence. Consider using transition words more effectively to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "vast majority" are used correctly but could be replaced with more precise and nuanced language. The phrasing 'mental health due to some issues' is a little vague; more specific examples would enhance lexical resource.

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There are several grammatical errors. For example, 'mental health due to some issues they are facing' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

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