Band 7+: Why are teachers always willing to help students?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is coherent and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the reasons behind the teacher's responsibility to instill confidence, providing specific examples of how helping students contributes to this goal. More detailed examples would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The slight hesitation at the beginning ('Oh well, I have never...') is understandable, and doesn't detract significantly. The response flows smoothly overall. Consider using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to enhance the flow even further (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' 'In addition to this').

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'instill confidence' and 'necessary job and duty' are well-chosen. However, there's room for more precise and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of 'active in helping,' consider 'proactive in supporting' or 'dedicated to assisting.'

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The phrase 'to do that kind of mission' is slightly awkward. Consider rephrasing to 'to achieve this goal' or 'to fulfill this responsibility.' The use of 'be active' instead of 'being active' is grammatically incorrect. While the meaning is clear, focusing on consistent grammatical accuracy is important for a higher score.