Band 4+: Why can it be expensive to visit cities on holiday?

Your pronunciation needs significant improvement as it may hinder comprehension. Devote time to individual sounds and their combinations.

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but lacks depth and detail. Consider expanding on the factors contributing to high costs, such as accommodation, transportation, food, and entertainment. Elaborating on specific examples would strengthen the response.

The answer is difficult to follow. There are several unclear phrases and grammatical errors that disrupt the flow. Work on sentence structure and clarity. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking to ensure a smoother delivery. Practice speaking at a more natural pace.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. While the core idea is conveyed, more sophisticated vocabulary would improve the answer. For example, instead of 'demands are high,' consider 'demand is high' or 'there is high demand.' The phrase 'transport goods' is acceptable but could be more specific depending on the context. The ending is unclear and needs improvement.

There are several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. The sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving sentence construction and grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles and prepositions.