Band 6+: why did you choose this field?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a reason for choosing the field. However, it could benefit from further elaboration on the connection between high school subjects and the chosen field, and how those subjects are applied in the workplace. Adding specific examples would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. However, the phrasing 'Well, we can say that the reason that pushed me...' is slightly unnatural and wordy. A more concise and direct approach would improve fluency. Try to avoid unnecessary phrases like 'we can say that'.

The vocabulary is adequate, with good use of words like 'paramount' and 'keen'. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'this type of subject,' consider using more specific terms related to the field.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as the incorrect use of 'subject light'. The sentence structure is also somewhat simplistic. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly enhance the score. Consider using relative clauses or participial phrases to add variety and sophistication.