Band 4+: Why did you choose this kind of work/to study this subject?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the question by providing reasons for choosing English (connecting with people and traveling), but the development is quite limited. To improve, try to expand on your ideas by using more complex sentence structures and providing more detail. For example, you could explain how English specifically helps you during your travels or what kind of international connections you hope to make. Aim to connect your ideas more fluidly to create a more cohesive response.

The response is very short and lacks development. There is noticeable repetition ('for travelling, for travelling'), which disrupts the flow. To improve, you should aim to expand your answers using the 'Answer + Reason + Example' structure. Instead of just stating a goal, explain *how* English helps you achieve it.

The vocabulary used is very basic ('ways', 'people', 'travelling', 'goal'). Additionally, in the raw answer, there was a significant semantic error ('not be international people') which changed the meaning entirely. Even in the refined version, the vocabulary is repetitive. Try to use more precise terms like 'facilitate communication,' 'broaden my horizons,' or 'global citizenship.'

The response consists of fragmented sentences rather than complex grammatical structures. The phrase 'For travelling, because I like travelling' is a sentence fragment. To reach a higher band, practice using subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'I chose to study English because it will allow me to...') to create complex sentences.