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Band 7+: Why do many people choose to move to big cities?

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There are several factors why people move to big cities. The first factor is job opportunities. People move to big cities with the hope of finding new jobs that can improve their quality of life. The second reason can be an increase in quality of life because there are more facilities such as markets, sports centers, and more. Living in a big city would be a great way to access these amenities.

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There are several factors why people move to big cities. First factor is job opportunities. People move to big cities with the hope of finding new job that can save their lives quality and increase it. Second reason can be increase life quality because there are more facilities such as markets, sports centers, etc. There are many of them and living in a big city would be a great way.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 2

people: 2

cities: 2

quality: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and covers the main points. Consider expanding on the reasons provided with more detailed examples and explanations to achieve a higher score. Also, ensure a more natural flow between ideas.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized, with a clear introduction and two main points. The speaker's fluency is good, although there is some slight hesitation and repetition. Minor improvements in phrasing would enhance fluency. For example, instead of 'increase life quality,' consider 'improve their quality of life.'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of 'save their lives quality' is slightly awkward and should be replaced with a more natural expression like 'improve their quality of life' or 'enhance their standard of living.' More precise vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as 'amenities' instead of 'facilities'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. 'Increase life quality' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'improve quality of life' or 'increase their quality of life.' The sentence 'There are many of them and living in a big city would be a great way' is slightly incomplete and could be improved by adding a subject and verb to the second clause. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.

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