Band 6+: why do people care too much money

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people care about money. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons and providing more specific examples. Consider exploring the psychological aspects of money, such as security and status, and providing more detailed examples of how money impacts quality of life.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is a slight hesitation at the beginning, and the conclusion is abrupt. Try to expand on your points and provide a more natural-sounding conclusion. Adding a concluding sentence summarizing your main points would improve the fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise and sophisticated. Instead of 'things you do,' consider more specific examples of how money improves quality of life (e.g., better healthcare, comfortable housing, travel). The phrase 'influence you have over people' is a bit vague; try to be more specific.

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'The more money you have, the more things you do and the more influence you have over people' is slightly awkward. Consider rephrasing to improve clarity and grammatical accuracy. The use of 'acquire education' is slightly unnatural; 'get an education' or 'pursue education' would be better choices. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.