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Band 5+: why do people enjoy playing computer games?

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People enjoy playing computer games because they think they help them relax and feel more energetic for their work. They sometimes forget about their daily routine and focus on computer games, enjoying the experience. Most games played by people are PUBG and E2 Star, which are quite popular. Some people also play games like Egg Bubble Trouble, among others.

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People enjoy playing computer games because they think they make them relax and more energetic for their work. They suffer some time, they forget about their daily routine and they’re exhausted in routine and focus on computer games and enjoy playing it. Most games that are playing by people are PUBG, E2 Star, they are more famous. Some people play games like Egg Bubble Trouble, etc.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

games: 4

people: 3

they: 3

computer: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people enjoy playing computer games. However, it could benefit from a broader range of reasons and a less specific focus on particular games. Consider exploring other motivations, such as social interaction, competition, problem-solving, or storytelling aspects found in games.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and slightly awkward phrasing. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'They suffer some time,' try 'Occasionally, they escape from...'

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Try to incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the experience of playing computer games. Instead of 'more energetic,' consider 'reinvigorated' or 'refreshed.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'They suffer some time' and the slightly awkward phrasing of the sentence. Work on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy for a higher score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

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