Band 6+: . Why do people have pets?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite good and covers several reasons why people keep pets. To improve, consider adding more diverse reasons and expanding on the existing points with specific examples or anecdotes. For instance, you could mention the therapeutic benefits of pets or the role they play in promoting physical activity.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and the ideas aren't always smoothly connected. Try using clearer transitions between your points (e.g., 'Another reason is...', 'Additionally...', 'Furthermore...').

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Phrases like "really good things" are a bit vague. Consider using more specific and descriptive vocabulary, such as 'companionship,' 'emotional support,' or 'stress relief.'

There are several grammatical errors, particularly with sentence structure and the use of conjunctions. Work on improving sentence complexity and accuracy. For example, instead of 'If they lonely,' say 'If they are lonely.' Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.