Band 7+: Why do people like to walk in parks?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly addresses the question and provides several reasons for why people, including the speaker, enjoy walking in parks. The answer includes personal experiences and observations, making it engaging and relevant. To further enhance the response, consider expanding on the benefits of fresh air and a good environment, or providing more specific examples of activities or sights that make parks appealing.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and slight redundancies. The use of 'also' multiple times makes the answer sound a bit repetitive. Try to vary your linking words and phrases to improve coherence. For example, instead of always using 'also,' you could use 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'moreover.'

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The phrase 'very kind of' is a bit vague. Consider using more precise and descriptive language. For example, instead of 'very kind of,' you could say 'very friendly' or 'very welcoming.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'I liked to work in parks' instead of 'I liked to walk in parks.' Also, 'the friends of my grandmothers or very kind of' is grammatically awkward. The sentence could be improved to 'I always saw my grandmother's friends, who were very kind.' Focus on using correct verb forms and structuring sentences more accurately.