Band 6+: Why do people like visiting places with trees and forests?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is well-developed and directly addresses the question. It provides a clear reason (escape from city life) and elaborates with specific points about pollution, crowding, and the benefits of fresh air and relaxation. The response is general, not personal, and uses natural language. To achieve a perfect score, the answer could be slightly more nuanced, perhaps mentioning other reasons such as connection with nature, physical activity, or mental well-being, and could be structured with a clearer topic sentence and supporting details.

The answer is coherent and logically organized, with a clear introduction and supporting points. However, there are some hesitations and self-corrections (e.g., 'hostile and bestow' instead of 'hustle and bustle', 'new place, place of beautiful places') that disrupt the flow. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use cohesive devices like 'for instance' or 'moreover' to link ideas more explicitly.

The vocabulary is adequate but not precise. There are errors such as 'hostile and bestow' (likely a mishearing of 'hustle and bustle'), 'address' (instead of 'crowded'), and 'rough race' (instead of 'rat race'). To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'tranquility', 'rejuvenation', 'urban sprawl') and practice using collocations correctly. The refined answer shows the intended words, so focus on accurate pronunciation and word choice.

There are several grammatical errors: 'Organization makes cities are more pollution' (should be 'Urbanization makes cities more polluted'), 'these place' (should be 'these places'), and 'help them get out of the rough race' (should be 'help them get out of the rat race'). The sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., conditionals, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun forms.