Band 6+: Why do people need good friendship

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant and provides a good reason for needing good friendships. However, it could be more developed by providing more specific examples or elaborating on the benefits of friendship. For example, the student could mention how friendships can reduce stress, improve mental health, or provide a sense of belonging.

The answer is generally coherent, but the student uses a lot of fillers like "uh" and "um." This makes the answer sound hesitant and less fluent. The student could improve fluency by pausing briefly to gather their thoughts before speaking.

The student uses some appropriate vocabulary, such as "support" and "guidance." However, the vocabulary is not particularly sophisticated or varied. The student could use more specific and descriptive language to enhance their lexical range.

The student uses a variety of grammatical structures, but there are some minor errors, such as the use of "in bad situations." The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying attention to prepositions and using more complex sentence structures.