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Band 7+: Why do people often feel guilty after making a mistake?

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After making mistakes, people often feel guilty because they recognize the serious damage caused to themselves and others. Moreover, they have a fear of retaliation from others. To enhance their relationships, they feel the need to redeem their mistakes and do anything to improve the situation or relationship.

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after making mistakes and feeling guilty is obviously because they actually the serious damages caused to themselves and others and moreover they actually have a fear of retaliation from others so that’s why to enhance the relationships with others or everyone they recently need to redeem the mistake and do anything to make situations or relationship become better yeah

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Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate, although some words could be more precise. 'Redeem the mistake' is a slightly unusual phrasing; consider alternatives like 'make amends' or 'repair the damage'. The vocabulary is functional but lacks sophistication.

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Why do people often feel guilty after making a mistake?

After making mistakes and feeling guilty are obviously because they acknowledge the damage actually serious damage is caused to themselves and others. So that’s why they want to redeem the mistakes after actually the bad consequences that they had caused before to enhance their relationships with others.

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