Band 6+: Why do some find it hard to make decisions?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question but includes personal feelings, which makes it less general. To improve, focus on providing broader reasons and avoid including personal experiences.

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and repetitions ('go as well as they thought it would go'). Using cohesive devices more effectively could improve the flow. For example, instead of 'and that's why,' try using 'consequently' or 'therefore' to link ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. 'Stutter in making decisions' is not the most natural phrasing; 'struggle with making decisions' is better. Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to decision-making, such as 'deliberate,' 'assess,' or 'evaluate.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there's a minor error: 'if their decision don't go well' should be 'if their decisions don't go well.' Focus on maintaining consistent subject-verb agreement and using correct plural forms. Varying sentence structures could also enhance the grammatical range.