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Band 6+: Why do some people become role models for others?

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How well, I am not familiar with this, but I believe it depends on people's perception because many people really want to care for others, so they are in their lives and feel comfortable. On the other hand, some people just show off their wealth. Like, last time I was watching videos on social media, I constantly saw someone who just boasted about their wealth to make others uncomfortable in their lives. So, I think it really depends on people.

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How well I am not familiar with this but I believe it depends on people’s perception because many people really want to care for other people so they are in their lives and feel comfortable. On the other hand some people just show off their wealth like I last time I was watching videos on social media and I constantly expose someone who just boast their wealth to make people uncomfortable in their life. So I think it really depends on people.

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others: 2

lives: 2

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