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Band 6+: why do some people have better memory

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I think it's because of the system, the healthy system they follow. If they eat no sugar and no fried food, and if they just eat vegetables and fruits, I think they're going to have an effective memory and a sharp memory as well. This depends on the person if they follow those criteria to improve their memory.

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I think it’s because of the system, the healthy system they follow. If they eat no sugar food and if they eat no fried food, if they just eat vegetable and fruit, I think they’re going to have an effective memory and a sharp memory as well. This depends on the person if he follows those criteria to improve his memory.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 4

memory: 3

think: 2

system: 2

follow: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to explain the reasons behind memory differences. However, it focuses heavily on diet and lacks a broader perspective. Consider exploring other factors such as genetics, cognitive training, and lifestyle choices to provide a more comprehensive response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetitions and self-corrections are present, but they do not significantly impede understanding. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "effective memory" and "sharp memory" are somewhat repetitive. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to describe memory function. For example, instead of 'effective memory', you could use 'enhanced memory' or 'improved recall'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The use of conditional sentences is appropriate. However, there is some inconsistency in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'he follows'). Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and try to use a wider range of grammatical structures.

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