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Band 6+: Why do some people like go live in cities?

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Some people think that living in an urban area is a better choice for them because they can easily immerse themselves in a breathtaking view and enjoy a lot of excellent facilities of a thriving metropolis like Ho Chi Minh City. For example, in Ho Chi Minh City, they can easily purchase a lot of cutting-edge technology devices, or use public transportation, smartphones, iPhones, iPads, or luxury cars. Besides that, they can easily find a lot of prestigious job opportunities in a prestigious national company, which is vital because they can earn a high salary and take care of their family. But on the other hand, living in the countryside is a good choice for older people because they love living in a peaceful atmosphere after many years working hard in the company. And from my point of view, it is also the best way for them to enhance their mental health.

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Some people think that living in urban area is a better choice for them because they can easily immerse themselves in a breathtaking view and enjoy a lot of excellent facilities of a thriving metropolis Ho Chi Minh City. For example, in Ho Chi Minh City, they can easily purchase a lot of of cutting edge of technology, devices, or public transportation, shut-hats, iPhone, iPad, or luxury core. Besides that, they can easily find a lot of prestigious job opportunities in a prestigious national company, which is vital because they can earn a high salary and take care of their family. But all the other hand, living in the countryside is a good choice for older people because they love living in the peaceful atmosphere after many years working hard in the company. And from my point of view, it is also the best way for them to enhance their mental have.

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living: 3

because: 3

easily: 3

people: 2

choice: 2

prestigious: 2

company: 2

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Task Response

The answer stays on topic and provides reasons why some people prefer big cities, such as access to facilities and job opportunities. However, it partially deviates by discussing countryside living for older people, which is not directly asked. The response is somewhat general but includes specific examples (Ho Chi Minh City) and a personal viewpoint at the end. To improve, focus more on the question's scope, avoid introducing unrelated contrasts, and ensure the answer remains general without personal opinions unless asked.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and organized, with a clear introduction and examples. However, there are some issues with cohesion and flow. The transition 'But all the other hand' is incorrect and disrupts the flow. Also, the answer shifts to discussing countryside living, which is not directly asked, and the final sentence is incomplete. To improve, use appropriate cohesive devices and stay focused on the question.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good phrases like 'immerse themselves in a breathtaking view' and 'thriving metropolis'. However, there are errors such as 'cutting edge of technology' (should be 'cutting-edge technology') and 'shut-hats' (likely meant 'smartphones'). Also, 'luxury core' is unclear. To improve, use more precise and accurate vocabulary, and avoid mispronunciations or word confusions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'living in urban area' should be 'living in an urban area', 'a lot of of' is redundant, 'prestigious national company' is awkward, and 'enhance their mental have' is incorrect (should be 'mental health'). The sentence structure is mostly simple, with limited use of complex structures. To improve, focus on accuracy and expand the range of grammatical structures used.

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