Band 6+: Why do some people like to keep plants at home?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and generalizability. Consider exploring a wider range of reasons why people keep plants at home, such as aesthetic appeal, air purification, and psychological benefits. Focus on providing more general reasons rather than personal opinions.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The phrasing 'when people work happily' is unclear and doesn't directly relate to keeping plants. A more coherent structure would be to directly state reasons why people keep plants, such as for aesthetic reasons, air purification, or stress reduction. Try to avoid unnecessary phrases like 'that time' and focus on clear and concise sentence structures.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like 'affects people life very effectively' are somewhat vague. More specific vocabulary would improve the answer. For example, instead of 'affects people's lives very effectively,' you could say 'improve air quality' or 'reduce stress levels.'

There are several grammatical errors. 'smell of this plant' should be 'smell the plants'. The sentence structure is often awkward. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to improve accuracy and fluency. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage.