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Band 6+: Why do some people not like staying in hotels

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I think people prefer to spend their time with their relatives or friends in accommodations like simple houses, not in hotels. Sometimes, when you are in a hotel alone, you may feel uncomfortable or something like that.

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I think because people prefer to spend their time with their relatives or with their friend in the accommodation and the simple houses not in the hotel because maybe sometimes when When you are in the hotel alone, you will feel uncomfortable or something like this.

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The response addresses the question but could benefit from more developed reasoning and a wider range of ideas. Consider exploring additional reasons why people might dislike staying in hotels, such as cost, lack of personal touch, or preference for alternative accommodations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using phrases like 'simple houses' is understandable, but consider more descriptive alternatives. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to accommodation and feelings of comfort.

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The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors (e.g., missing articles, awkward phrasing). For example, 'in the accommodation and the simple houses' could be improved. Focus on using articles correctly and constructing more natural-sounding sentences. Review basic grammar rules and practice sentence construction.

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