Band 6+: Why do some people open their own business

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear reason for why people start their own businesses. The answer could be strengthened by exploring additional reasons or providing more detailed explanations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. The ideas are generally connected, but the transitions could be smoother. Try to use more linking words and phrases to improve coherence. For example, you could use 'furthermore' or 'in addition' to introduce new points.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The word choice is simple and could be more varied. To improve, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to business and entrepreneurship. For example, instead of 'work,' you could use 'dedicate time' or 'invest effort'.

There are grammatical errors, such as incorrect pronoun usage ('when he wants to work he works' should be 'when they want to work, they work') and awkward phrasing ('also walks but they are must be disciplined'). The range of grammatical structures is limited. Focus on using correct pronoun agreement and a wider variety of sentence structures. For example, try using complex sentences with clauses to express more nuanced ideas.