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Band 4+: Why do some people want to start their own business?

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I think starting your own business gives you freedom. You don't have to answer to anyone else. In my opinion, many people want to be their own boss and control their own destiny.

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I think if you have your own business, you will become freedom. And anyone don’t become your boss. Um, so in my opinion, uh, most of the people want to start your own business.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people might want to start their own business. However, the answer is a bit general and could be more specific. For example, the student could have mentioned the potential for financial gain or the satisfaction of being in control of one's own work. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The student uses fillers like "um" and repeats themselves a bit. The answer could be more fluent and natural with a bit more practice.

Lexical Resource

The student uses some appropriate vocabulary, but there are also some errors. For example, the student says "become freedom" instead of "have freedom." The student could improve their lexical resource by using more precise and varied vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The answer contains some grammatical errors. For example, the student says "anyone don't become your boss" instead of "no one becomes your boss." The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying more attention to subject-verb agreement and using correct tenses.

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