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Band 7+: Why do some people want to start their own business?

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I think starting your own business gives you a lot of freedom. You don't have to answer to anyone else. In my opinion, many people want to be their own boss and control their own destiny. They want to be in charge of their own success.

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I think starting your own business gives you freedom. Uh, you don’t have to answer to anyone else. In my opinion, many people want to be their own boss and control their own destiny.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

7.5

The answer is relevant and addresses the question directly. The student provides a clear and concise explanation of why people might want to start their own business. The answer could be slightly more developed by providing a few more reasons, such as the potential for financial gain or the opportunity to be creative and innovative. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is delivered fluently with only a few minor hesitations. The ideas are well-organized and presented in a logical order. The use of cohesive devices like "in my opinion" and "they want to" helps to connect the ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like "freedom", "destiny", and "boss". However, there is room for improvement in terms of using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of "control their own destiny", the student could have said "shape their own future".

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer is grammatically accurate with only a few minor errors. The student uses a variety of sentence structures, including simple and complex sentences. The use of the present tense is consistent throughout the answer.

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