Band 7+: Why do some people wear expensive watches?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer is quite good and covers the main points. Consider exploring other reasons, such as collecting, or the watch's historical or sentimental value, to further enrich your response.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements could be made by using more sophisticated linking words or phrases to enhance the flow even further. For example, instead of 'Especially when expensive watches are worn, they may need to attract attention...' you could say 'Furthermore, wearing an expensive watch can serve to attract attention...'

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The word 'perfect' could be replaced with a more precise word like 'polished' or 'sophisticated' to reflect a higher level of vocabulary. Using more varied and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response.

The grammar is mostly accurate with only a minor error ('need' instead of 'want'). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would demonstrate a wider range and improve the score.