Band 7+: Why do you learn english?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a few reasons for learning English. To improve, consider elaborating on each reason with specific examples or details. For instance, instead of saying 'learning English helped me earn a lot of money,' you could explain how, such as through job opportunities or higher salary. Similarly, providing an example of a situation where confidence in communicating with foreigners would be beneficial would strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The structure is clear, and the ideas flow logically. Minor improvements could be made by avoiding the slight hesitation at the beginning ("Yes, it's interesting question") and by using more sophisticated linking words to connect the ideas more smoothly (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' instead of 'Besides that').

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate. Words like "major" and "communicate" are used effectively. The phrase "earn lots of money" could be slightly improved to "earn a lot of money" for better precision. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence "I learned English because it is my major as well as learning English helped me earn lots of money" is slightly awkward and could be improved by separating it into two distinct sentences. The use of "communicate to foreigners" should be "communicate with foreigners." While the errors are minor, using more complex grammatical structures would improve the score.