Band 7+: Why do you think wild animals should be protected?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear reason for protecting wild animals. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the consequences of biodiversity loss or providing specific examples to support your points.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'From my point of view' is a good way to introduce a personal perspective. However, there's a slight pause before 'it can result,' which affects fluency a bit. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary pauses.

The vocabulary is adequate and includes relevant terms like 'extinction,' 'species,' and 'biodiversity.' However, the phrase 'appear one time' is not idiomatic. Using more precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the response. For example, instead of 'appear one time,' use 'disappear' or 'become extinct'.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there's a minor error: 'If they appear one time' should be 'If they disappear.' Also, 'in the nature' should be 'in nature.' Correcting these small errors will improve grammatical accuracy. Focus on using articles and prepositions correctly.