Part 3

Band 6+: Why is online shopping so popular these days

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I think as a result of delivery and the availability of choices, online shopping is becoming very popular among people. They tend to choose a variety of things they want without going to a store, and it can be so easy for them.

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I think as a result of delivering and arranging of choices online shopping are becoming so popular among people. People tend to choose a variety of things which they want without going in a rear and it can be so easy for them.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a couple of reasons for the popularity of online shopping. However, to improve, consider expanding on the reasons given and providing more detailed explanations. Explore other factors contributing to this trend, such as convenience, price comparison, and 24/7 availability.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing could be improved for greater fluency. The structure is a bit disjointed. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'I think as a result of...', you could say 'The popularity of online shopping stems from...' or 'Several factors contribute to the popularity of online shopping, including...'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. Words like 'delivering and arranging of choices' are not very precise. Try to use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of 'a variety of things,' you could say 'a wide selection of goods' or 'a diverse range of products.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'delivering and arranging of choices' which is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is also quite simple. Try to use a wider range of grammatical structures, including more complex sentences and varied sentence beginnings. Pay attention to articles and prepositions.

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