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Band 7+: why is that many people today don't do enough healthy activities?

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I think basically this happens because people are just not motivated enough to do these healthy activities. For example, compared to the past, we were more encouraged to engage in healthy activities, do sports, and eat healthily. Of course, today we also have this trend for health food, but it's nothing compared to the previous culture of being active and interested in sports. I think if we had more advertising for healthy lifestyles, we would move more in this direction.

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I think basically this happens because people are just not enough motivated to do this healthy activities. For example, compared to the past we were more encouraged to do all this healthy activities, do sports, eat healthy. Of Of course, today we also have this fat for health food, but it’s nothing compared to the previous culture of being active and being interested in sports. I think if we had more advertising of healthy lifestyles, we would do more in this direction.

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healthy: 3

more: 3

think: 2

activities: 2

compared: 2

sports: 2

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The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant reasons for the lack of healthy activities. The answer includes a comparison to the past and a suggestion for improvement. To enhance the response, consider providing more specific examples or elaborating on the potential impact of increased advertising for healthy lifestyles.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The phrase 'fat for health food' is a bit awkward and could be rephrased. Aim to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'fat for health food,' you could say 'trend for health food' or 'emphasis on healthy eating'.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'not enough motivated' instead of 'not motivated enough.' The range of structures is somewhat limited. Focus on using more complex sentence structures accurately and paying attention to word order and common grammatical errors.

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