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Band 6+: Why might reading books be a better activity for children than playing video games

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Firstly, because reading stimulates the imagination and encourages creativity, it can also stimulate the brain. Additionally, it provides them the opportunity to learn about new cultures, traditions, and history.

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Firstly, because reading stimulates the imagination and encourages creativity, so it can stimulate the brain. Additionally, it provides them the opportunity to learn about new culture, new tradition, new history also.

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Pronunciation

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6.5

The answer is mostly coherent and fluent. However, the connection between stimulating imagination/creativity and stimulating the brain could be made clearer. Consider using linking words like "thus" or "therefore" to show the cause-and-effect relationship more explicitly. Also, try to avoid unnecessary repetition of words like "new".

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6.5

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6.5

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