Band 6+: WHY PEOPLE LIKE TO TRAVEL BY PLANE ?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the question directly and provides relevant reasons for why people enjoy travelling by plane. Expanding on the types of people who enjoy flying and providing more specific examples could further enhance the response.

The response is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and a lack of smooth flow. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. Try to use more cohesive devices to link your ideas together. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to that' or 'Furthermore' to add more information.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. 'Confinesian Fibes' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse of a word. Using more specific and accurate vocabulary would improve the response. For example, instead of 'good facilities,' you could say 'modern amenities' or 'state-of-the-art features.'

There are grammatical errors, such as 'plane is designed' (should be 'planes are designed') and 'get arrive arrived' (should be 'to arrive'). The sentence structure is simple. Try to use a wider range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences, to express your ideas more effectively. For example, you could say, 'One reason people enjoy traveling by plane is that planes are now designed with modern amenities, which makes the journey more comfortable.'