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Band 6+: Why should people donate to charities?

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As far as I'm concerned, people choose to donate to charitable organizations in modern society. There are several reasons why many people choose to donate. One of the main reasons is that people try to show goodness to poor, needy individuals. They donate clothes, blankets, money, and so on. As a result, this goodness spreads and increases public awareness.

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As far as I concerned, people chose to donate to charitable organizations in modern society. So there are several reasons why many people chose to donate. So one of the main reasons is that people try to, goodness to poor, needy people. So they donate with some closers, blankets, money and etc. As a result, this goodness spreads to all the way and increases the public awareness.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 3

donate: 3

choose: 2

reasons: 2

goodness: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear reason for donating to charitable organizations. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the impact of donations or exploring additional motivations behind charitable giving. Providing specific examples or discussing the psychological benefits of donating could also add depth to the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('So,' 'chose to donate'). The organization is basic, with a clear attempt to introduce reasons, but could be more developed. Try to avoid starting sentences with 'So' and aim for more varied cohesive devices. Practice speaking more smoothly and connecting your ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Phrases like 'goodness to poor, needy people' are somewhat simplistic. Use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary related to charity, altruism, and social responsibility. For example, instead of 'goodness,' consider using 'compassion' or 'altruism.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors and awkward phrasing ('people try to, goodness'). The range of structures is limited. Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and different verb tenses, to express your ideas more precisely. Pay attention to correct word order and avoid unnecessary commas.

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