Band 4+: Why sport is important?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and coherence. Focus on expanding on the benefits of sports, such as physical and mental health improvements, social interaction, and skill development. Use clearer and more concise language to express your ideas effectively.

The answer is difficult to follow. There are several unclear phrases, such as "a marker is so hard for hardery" and "34RL." The structure is also incoherent. Work on organizing your thoughts and speaking in a more logical sequence. Practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary hesitations or repetitions. Focus on delivering a clear and concise message.

The vocabulary is limited and contains several errors. Words like "hardery" and "unhose" are not correct. You need to expand your vocabulary and use more precise language. Pay attention to the correct use of words related to sports and fitness. Try using synonyms and more descriptive words to enhance your vocabulary.

The grammar contains several errors. The sentence structures are often incorrect and unclear. Work on improving your grammar, particularly sentence structure and tense consistency. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more accurately and effectively. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.