Band 6+: Would you change anything about your home? why/ why not?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the prompt's request for a change and providing clear reasons. Consider expanding on the impact of the changes, perhaps describing how a larger dining room or different wall color would improve family gatherings or the overall atmosphere. Adding specific details about the desired changes would further enhance the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ('because that place'). Improving the flow with more natural connectors would enhance fluency. For example, instead of 'That's why I want to change it and also the colour', consider 'Therefore, I would also change the colour...'

Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. Words like 'expand their times' could be replaced with more precise language, such as 'spend a lot of time' or 'gather frequently'. Using more varied and precise vocabulary would improve the score.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors ('space of my house's dining room' is slightly awkward, 'change in future in white' is grammatically incorrect). More complex grammatical structures would improve the score. For example, using passive voice or relative clauses would add sophistication.