Describe a place you have visited. You should say: where this place is when you went there who you went with and explain why you liked this place

First and foremost, last year during the holiday, I visited a new city located in France. I went to the capital, Paris. It's a very beautiful city. I went on a tour. The atmosphere was wonderful. I had fun taking pictures. I went with my family and took my children with me; they enjoyed discovering [...]