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Band 6+: 1. Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. Mention about the current sport facilities available What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear sir or madam,

I am Ali Ahmed from Binder village, Suhag province. I work as an inspector in the municipality. I am writing to request introducing a new facility to our Village.

Currently, we have some amenities that serve the community here in a perfect way. Some of which is the soccer field. although it is quite small, we enjoy playing as well as gathering there.

Since we live near the river, youngers are used to go swimming there, which I find incredibly dangerous. This is because most of those going to swim are not professionals, leading to some facing the potential of drowning. Of course, they are aware of the hazard; however, they do not have any other options.

By introducing a swimming pool to our Village, it could provide the community here with a secure environment to all the youths. Additionally, parents will no longer fear afraid about their children as they can send them to a closed place which has a professional trainer who will teach not only my age group but also anyone who wants to learn swimming the right way.

I hope you consider my request and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Ali Ahmed

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

which: 3

swimming: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter effectively addresses the task by requesting additional sports facilities, mentioning existing facilities, suggesting a specific facility, and explaining its benefits. However, it could be improved by providing more details about the existing facilities and the specific needs of the age group.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow, which could be improved with more careful editing.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter contains some grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tenses. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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