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Band 4+: 5 type of export and export from USA TO UK

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The image presents, first, a table listing the top USA exports in 2021 with values and percentage changes in 2020: Rank 1, Electric Vehicles, $28bn, -40% change; Rank 2, Gold, $20.1bn, -10% change; Rank 3, Jets, $20.5bn, -25% change; Rank 4, Medication, $19.1bn, +1.5% change; Rank 5, Petroleum, $17bn, -32% change. Additionally, there is a bar chart showing the percentage of USA exports sent to the UK from 2010 to 2020: 2010, 55%; 2012, 50%; 2014, 45%; 2016, 35%; 2018, 40%; 2020, 45%.

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The table provides information about the top 5 USA exports in 2021 and the annual proportion change in 2020, while the bar chart illusatrt of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 to 2020.

Overall, electric vehicles had the highest proportion, the smallest share taken by Petroleum, for the bar chart, in 2010 had the largest percentage. Meanwhile, the last year had the fwest.

In detail, electric vehicles made up around 28 billion, while Gold accounted for almost 20 billion. follown by Jets at 20 billion. however, Medication and petroleum were nearly 19 and 17 billions .

By contrast, in 2010 USA made up approximately 60 of USA exports sent to the UK from 2010 to 2020. In comparison, In 2012 fell to 45, then decreased gradually to 40, then experienced downward, until at the end of the period of the period reached it roughly 40.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, covering both the table and the bar chart. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. In the overview, the description of the bar chart is confusing and lacks a clear trend. In the body paragraphs, some data points are presented without clear units or context, and the description of the bar chart trends is inconsistent and difficult to follow (e.g., stating it fell to 45, then decreased to 40, then reached 40 again). To improve, ensure that trends are described logically and that all numerical data is clearly linked to the correct categories and timeframes. Work on sentence structure to ensure the relationship between the data and the trends is coherent. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat confusing, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logic. The overview paragraph attempts to combine data from both the table and the bar chart in a way that is grammatically fragmented, which obscures the main trends. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear purpose: one for the overview of main trends and separate body paragraphs for each visual aid. Use clearer transition signals (e.g., 'Regarding the table...' or 'Turning to the bar chart...') to guide the reader through the different sets of data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'illusatrt', 'fwest', 'follown'). There is also some repetitive use of basic words. To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'plummeted', 'remained stable') and ensure that units of measurement (e.g., 'billion', 'percent') are used correctly and consistently. Avoid using 'made up' when referring to monetary values; instead, use 'valued at' or 'amounted to'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure, such as run-on sentences and fragments (e.g., 'the smallest share taken by Petroleum, for the bar chart, in 2010 had the largest percentage'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, with improper capitalization and missing periods. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and practice using complex sentences with subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'While electric vehicles were the top export, petroleum recorded the lowest value.') to improve accuracy.

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