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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in 1958 and 2008. In 1958, the chart indicates adults spent 23% working, 36% sleeping, 9% traveling to work, 16% relaxing at home, 11% on other interests or playing sports, and 5% going out with family or friends. In 2008, the percentages shift to 19% working, 36% sleeping (same as 1958), 12% traveling to work, 14% relaxing at home, 9% on other interests or playing sports, and 10% going out with family or friends.

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The given diagrams indicate the fraction of time which was spent by employed adults on various activities in a specific country in 1958 and 2008.

The most striking feature is that people started to dedicate more time to work rather than going out with friends and family, which also affected the sleeping schedule. The percentage of time spent on work and sleeping made up aproximately a third parts in 1958. The fraction of working time increased to 42% in 2008, however, a time dedicated to sleeping fell considerably to a quarter. The percentage of time dedicated to hanging out with friends decreased significantly from 19% to a tiny fraction of 6%. In contrast, both, the fraction of time spent on other interests and traveling for work rose from 6% and 2%,respectively, to 8% in 2008. In addition, the percentage of time dedicated to relaxing at home comprised of 8% in 1958 increased by 5% in 2008.

To sum up, traveling for work became more popular in 2008 as well as relaxing at home.

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fraction: 4

spent: 3

sleeping: 3

percentage: 3

dedicated: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. Key data points are misreported (e.g., work time is stated as 42% in 2008, but the visual description indicates 19%; sleeping is said to fall to 25%, but it remains at 36%; going out with friends is reported as 19% in 1958, whereas the correct figure is 5%). Additionally, some categories are omitted or inaccurately described (e.g., 'other interests' and 'traveling to work' are not correctly represented). The report also lacks a clear overview and fails to make accurate comparisons between the two years. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and ensuring all data is correctly interpreted from the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, and the information is presented in a logical order. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'a time dedicated to sleeping fell considerably'). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some transitions could be smoother. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'fraction', 'dedicated', 'striking feature'), but there are inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'fraction of time' used multiple times, 'dedicated' overused). Some word choices are imprecise (e.g., 'a third parts', 'a tiny fraction'). To improve, vary the vocabulary and use more precise terms (e.g., 'proportion', 'accounted for', 'rose' instead of 'increased').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include 'aproximately a third parts' (incorrect spelling and plural), 'a time dedicated to sleeping fell' (article misuse), 'both, the fraction...' (comma misuse), and 'comprised of 8% in 1958 increased by 5%' (incorrect verb form). The range of sentence structures is limited. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence construction. Practice using a variety of complex sentences with accurate grammar.

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