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Band 5+: A friend of yours is coming to your city for a short visit. Write a letter to your friend giving advice on: - What places they should visit - Where they should stay - How they should prepare for the trip

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Dear Caner,

I hope you are doing great. I am pleased to hear that you are going to visit Eskişehir next week. Unfortunately, I am abroad but I will provide you some information and to-do list to enjoy your stay in there.

Firstly, you must definitely visit Sazova Park. There is a big zoo and enormous castle that you can not see anywhere else. Additionally, do not forget to stroll along the Porsuk River, it is a perfect spot to relax and enjoy the view. Also, there are coffee shops either side of the river that you can try local drinks.

During your time in this lovely city, I suggest you to stay in Marriot Hotel which has 5 stars and provide the best breakfast including çibörek which is the most famous local food. Moreover, Eskişehir is kinda cold nowadays and as snow is expected, bring your coat and boaos that will keep you warm. Lastly, do not forget your camera, you will see unique places.

If you require more information do not hesitate to contact me. Enjoy your trip!

Berkan.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant information on places to visit, accommodation, and trip preparation. However, some aspects could be more detailed and descriptive for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between paragraphs and ideas. Some sentences lack a clear connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, accurately conveying the necessary information. However, more sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices could enhance the overall lexical resource.

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While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy and range is crucial for a higher score.

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